Tuesday, September 14, 2010

assesment test

  Advertisement in north America has been at an increasing rate, From the time you wake up in the mooring to the time you go to sleep you have been feed about 3 thousand toxic pollutants comical message according to the passage. you may find these advertisement mostly common on buss, billboards and now even when you are pumping your gas at the gas station, you may all so see it on the window of the little screen on the ATM at the bank, when you are on the road you may see Sigh on your clothing, shoes, story and even on wall. Advertisements are all so even been presented to our young minds on TV, children show, class room an even on the games they play.

  Advertisement are all around ours an is showing no Singh of slowing down, cause of  the marketing call ads. These type of advertisement or ad's are even on the food we eat and on the drink we buy. On our way home we may see it on the bags, and on the radio in the car, some time we Will hear it on the song we may listen to, may even be telling you about a product or describing the advertisement like the song Everybody looking by Gucci man, he was advertising the new the chins, watch, rings and the car another good example is the new movie megamind coming out soon on november 5, the movie is advertising mc Donald's kids meal.

    But last but not least we may find them in our very homes on the cups, plats, sheet and even on the floor in our bath an bath room. They might even have it in the pleases we may not even know, look or even think it may be as our clocks, pots, and the biggest attachment of all our  television. Advertisement is an inescapable part of our life even on the one most important part of our house like our bed like on the bed head and pillow. The toxic pollutants have no bounders an will continue to pollute our minds.

1 comment:

  1. The Good
    1. In the last paragraph you began to add details of your own.
    2. The whole seems organized.

    The Bad
    1. The summary does not include the main idea (that ads are mental pollutants/toxic)and does not identify the author by name.

    2. Your own thesis (main point) is not clear yet--do you agree? disagree? why?

    So, what do you think you should work on first?

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